"My Credit Card Refused Again" by Brandon Williams

It’s worse because the cashier, gray-eyed and red-lipped with a tattoo of Willie Nelson on her arm, smiles. It’s worse because the man, thirty-something with a rumpled business suit and tie hanging like a dog’s tongue, let me slip in front of him since I only had milk and eggs and meat, and it’s worse because I have seven dollars in my pocket and that’s not enough by eighty-nine cents.  It’s worse because I checked my limit this morning, and the peddling mice that energize my computer said I had two hundred and forty-three dollars I could spend.  It’s worse because I wore my good shirt, the one without the pinstripes, and was hoping to say something suave to make that gray-eyed cashier remember me.  It’s worse because she will.
Brandon Williams ( 22, Placerville, CA) is a recent graduate of the University of California, Riverside. He likes to read the greats, which is probably why he often looks to be overwhelmed. He is a firm believer in down-home country music and is probably a strict constitutionalist. None of this matters if he can't take a good picture.

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